Homework& questions
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Homework:
It depends on what kind of crime the prisoner committed. I think if a prisoner who committed a horrible and terrible crime or killed a person for no reason, they should be in prison. Because they have mental problems, I think it is too dangerous to come out into society and work with ordinary people. We never know when and how they plot and commit other crimes.
And Teacher~ could you please correct the sentences below if it is correct too?
I had a very close friend. She was a girl, and I thought she was very close to me, while I was close with her I got to know her other friend who was from another school but she dropped out of school and run a way from her home. So there was no place for her to go, so I used to put her to bed often at my home. but I didn\'t know she didn\'t like me Even though I\'ve been so good to her. she even tried to drive a wedge between me and my friend to make the relationship between me and my friend fall apart.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Let me remind you of capitalization and punctuation again.
The quality of your sentences are generally good.
We just need to make some small changes to follow the grammar rules and vocabulary.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It depends on what kind of crime the prisoner committed.
>> Correct
I think if a prisoner who committed a horrible and terrible crime or killed a person for no reason, they should be in prison.
>> I think if a prisoner committed a horrible and terrible crime or killed a person for no reason, they should be in prison.
Because they have mental problems, I think it is too dangerous to come out into society and work with ordinary people.
>> Because they have mental problems, I think it is too dangerous for them to come out to society and work with ordinary people.
We never know when and how they plot and commit other crimes.
>> We never know when and how they could plot and commit other crimes.
I had a very close friend.
I had a very close friend.
>> Correct
She was a girl, and I thought she was very close to me,
>> She was a girl and I thought we were very close.
while I was close with her I got to know her other friend who was from another school but she dropped out of school and run a way from her home.
>> During that time I got to know her other friend who was from another school but she dropped out of school and ran away from home.
So there was no place for her to go, so I used to put her to bed often at my home.
>> That\'s why there was no place for her to go, so I used to let her sleep in my house often.
but I didn\'t know she didn\'t like me Even though I\'ve been so good to her.
>> However, I didn\'t know she didn\'t like me even though I had been so good to her.
she even tried to drive a wedge between me and my friend to make the relationship between me and my friend fall apart.
>> She even tried to drive a wedge between me and my friend to make our relationship fall apart.
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