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When I coummunicate in English, I use facial expression, and hands as body language. If I’m embarrassed, I grasp my hand. If I get angry, I rest my hand on waist. When I’m happy, I can’t hide my teeth. When I deliver a speech, There are many ways using body language like closing my fist to stress something, counting with my fingers.
When I entered a university and went to OT, I met best friend for the first time. We were weak in drink, We didn’t force to drink each other. It was the start of a lifelong friendship
I never tell about my friend’s weaknesses playfully to someone. Also if he/she speak seriously, I take seriously. I didn\'t treat them based on my mood, so even if I’m angry, I don’t blame them. if so, our relationship will be broken. there is another thing I never did to my friends. i’ve never borrow a large sum of money from a friend. It can also worsen the relationship
Hello! I’m sorry that I postponed today class because of a farewell meeting. I have only 2 days left to
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When I coummunicate in English, I use facial expression, and hands as body language.
>> When I communicate in English, I use body language such as facial expressions and hand gestures.
If I’m embarrassed, I grasp my hand.
>> If I’m embarrassed, I keep my hands clenched.
If I get angry, I rest my hand on waist.
>> If I get angry, I rest my hands on my waist.
When I’m happy, I can’t hide my teeth.
>> CORRECT!
When I deliver a speech, There are many ways using body language like closing my fist to stress something, counting with my fingers.
>> When I deliver a speech, There are many ways that I use body language like closing my fist to stress something or counting with my fingers.
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When I entered a university and went to OT, I met best friend for the first time.
When I entered a university and went to OT, I met best friend for the first time.
>> When I entered The University and went on my On-Job Training, I met best friend for the first time.
We were weak in drink, We didn’t force to drink each other.
>> We were weak drinkers then, but we didn’t force to drink each other.
It was the start of a lifelong friendship
>> It was the start of a lifelong friendship.
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I never tell about my friend’s weaknesses playfully to someone.
I never tell about my friend’s weaknesses playfully to someone.
>> I never joke about my friend’s weaknesses to someone.
Also if he/she speak seriously, I take seriously.
>> Also if he or she speaks seriously, I take it seriously.
I didn\'t treat them based on my mood, so even if I’m angry, I don’t blame them.
>> I don\'t treat them based on my mood, so even if I’m angry, I don’t blame them.
if so, our relationship will be broken.
>> if so, our relationship will be broken.
there is another thing I never did to my friends.
>> There is also another thing I never do to my friends.
i’ve never borrow a large sum of money from a friend.
>> I\'ve never borrowed a large sum of money from a friend.
It can also worsen the relationship
>> It can also worsen the relationship.
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