HOMEWORK(Seollal)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing about your favorite holiday. Yes. It\'s nice to know that all of you gather together
on this special holiday. In the Philippines, Filipinos love Christmas day and New Year\'s Day. We don\'t follow lunar calendar.
Have a good weekend! ^^
~~May~~
As we know, The Lunar New Year is settled by cycles of the moon.
>> As we know, Lunar New Year is set based on the cycles of the moon.
When we meet to together at this time, we make many kinds of food.
>> When we gather together during this holiday, we make many kinds of food.
Specially, We eat tteokguk on Seollal because it is a traditional New Year \' s Day food.
>> We eat tteokguk because it is a traditional New Year\' s Day food.
When Our family and I usually make the food, we put dumplings, meat, or seafood.
>> When we make foods, we prepare dumplings, meat and seafoods.
It makes the food taste so delicious and with a rich flavor.
>> It makes the food so delicious and rich in flavor.
When get together with my relatives, we sometimes play folk games with joy.
>> When We get together with our relatives, we sometimes play folk games with joy.
For one, A popular game is \"yunnori\" which is a traditional board game.
>> One popular game is yunnori\" which is a traditional board game.
When we play the game, we throw sticks to move their pieces.
>> When we play the game, we throw sticks to move the pieces.
The team that makes their all pieces arrive at final destination wins the game.
>> The team that makes their pieces arrive at the final destination wins the game.
Besides, Text messaging is very common throughout Our nation. so People usually send text messages to friends, associates with their cell phones.
>> In addition, text messaging is also very common in our country so people usually send text messages to friends using their cellphones.
So one of my favorite holidays is a Seollal.
>> Therefore, one of my favorite holidays is Seollal.
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