Homework-Social networking

Do social-networking sites such as Facebook and MySpace enhance a young person's social life or serve as a substitute for a real social life? Compose an essay in which you develop your point of view on this topic. Support your position with arguments and examples drawn from your reading, studies, experience, and observations. I don’t agree the statement that social-networking enhance a young person’s social life. Many young people spend much time to do social-networking with their friends. Of course, they can keep in touch and say hello to each other using it. But I think that relationship could be superficial not deep. If they do social-networking when they contact with their friends, it could rather reduce young person’s social skill. Even worse, they could rely on only that sites and avoid to face to face meeting. Therefore, I don’t think social-networking enhance a young person’s social life.

Hello [이름]!   Have a happy weekend~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I don’t agree the statement that social-networking enhance a young person’s social life. >> I don\'t agree with the statement that social networking enhances a young person\'s social life. Many young people spend much time to do social-networking with their friends. Of course, they can keep in touch and say hello to each other using it. But I think that relationship could be superficial not deep. If they do social-networking when they contact with their friends, it could rather reduce young person’s social skill. Even worse, they could rely on only that sites and avoid to face to face meeting. >> Many young people spend time on social networking sites with their friends where they use it to keep in touch but I think that this creates superficial relationships and not deep ones.  If they use social networking to keep in contact with their friends, it would lessen their social skills. Even worse, they would rely on those sites and avoid meeting personally.Therefore, I don’t think social-networking enhance a young person’s social life. >> This is why I don\'t agree with the statement that social networking enhances a young person\'s social life.