Homework(subway)

2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Teacher, Another week has started. The weather is cold, but the air is clean~. Have a pleasant and happy day with you^^ There are many countries in the world, and there are also many cities(like New York, Seoul, Boston and so on~).Most big cities have subways because they have lots of cars on the road. so it takes time to go somewhere in time. The bigger the city, the more complicated the subway lines are. In spite of the complexity, the subway is a convenient way to get around in big cities. When I first lived in Seoul, I usually stayed at home or went around the home only. Back then, the subway lines looked crowded and I was not good at taking the subway so I couldn\'t get around. However, as time went by, I found out about the Seoul subway system. And now I realize that using public transportation is convenient in Seoul. Most people think that the subway made getting around very easy. Because, it is quick and there are good metro and city bus connections in my City.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing about Seoul\'s public transportation system.

As you know, train and subways are not very common in the Philippines.

The main vehicles are jeepney, tricycle, motorcycle, bus, vans, and cars.

Take care and always enjoy the day! ^^

~~May~~

There are many countries in the world, and there are also many cities(like New York, Seoul, Boston and so on~).

Most big cities have subways because they have lots of cars on the road. so it takes time to go somewhere in time.

The bigger the city, the more complicated the subway lines are.

>> CORRECT

In spite of the complexity, the subway is a convenient way to get around in big cities.

>> In spite of the complexity, subway is a convenient way to get around in big cities.
When I first lived in Seoul, I usually stayed at home or went around the home only.

>> When I first lived in Seoul, I only stayed at home or went around the house.

Back then, the subway lines looked crowded and I was not good at taking the subway so I couldn\'t get around. 

>> CORRECT
However, as time went by, I found out about the Seoul subway system.

>> However, as time went by, I have found the Seoul subway system.

And now I realize that using public transportation is convenient in Seoul.

>> CORRECT

Most people think that the subway made getting around very easy. Because, it is quick and there are good metro and city bus connections in my City.

>> Most people think that subways are made to get to your destination very easily because it is quick. There are good metro and city bus connections in my city.  

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