Homework & Sudden happening
학생이 쓴 원문
1. By this time tomorrow I WILL HAVE FINISHED the book.
-> article
2. I'll see you IN three hours.
-> conjunction
3. He is the FASTEST runner in the school.
-> adverb
4. WHAT is love?
-> interrogative ...??????
5. He went to see the doctor because he wasn't feeling WELL.
-> adverb
I'm so sorry for today. My mother answered your call. Because I didn't stay at home. I cared my father. He drunk a lot. I don't know the reason why he did that. Suddenly he called me and said (20 minutes before your call), he couldn't found my house, because of the alcohol, so come and take him to the home. My mother and he hasn't great relationship, so I went there alone. To make matters worse, he couldn't explain where he is. So I called to police and fire station, but they couldn't help me. So I went here and there to find him. What the.. :( Fortunately I found him by accident. But I washed his body and hair, face too!!! Of course he didn't take off his underware. But I'm not a wife, and I'm not a slave!!! He is crazy.. oh my gosh. I really really really miss you. Talk to you tomorrow. Have a good night sister.
강사 첨삭
Hi sis! :)
Good evening. Tell me more about that sis.
I\'m very sorry to hear that. :(
I really miss you. See you tomorrow sister. I\'ll tell you about my encounter with your mom.
Teacher Carmen ^^
1. By this time tomorrow I WILL HAVE FINISHED the book. -> article
>> verb2. I\'ll see you IN three hours. -> conjunction
>> preposition3. He is the FASTEST runner in the school. -> adverb
>> adjective4. WHAT is love? -> interrogative ...??????
>> pronoun5. He went to see the doctor because he wasn\'t feeling WELL. -> adverb
>> Correct!I\'m so sorry for today.
>> Correct!
My mother answered your call.
>> Correct!
Because I didn\'t stay at home.
>> It\'s because I wasn\'t at home.
I cared my father.
>> I took care of my father.
He drunk a lot.
>> He was very drunk.
I don\'t know the reason why he did that.
>> Correct!
Suddenly he called me and said (20 minutes before your call), he couldn\'t found my house, because of the alcohol, so come and take him to the home.
>> He suddenly called me 20 minutes before our class and said that he couldn\'t find our house because he was very drunk. So I went out to take him back home.
My mother and he hasn\'t great relationship, so I went there alone.
>> My parents are not in good terms so I went there alone.
To make matters worse, he couldn\'t explain where he is.
>> To make matters worse, he couldn\'t explain where he was.
So I called to police and fire station, but they couldn\'t help me.
>> So I called the police and the fire station, but they couldn\'t help me.
So I went here and there to find him. What the.. :(
>> Correct!
Fortunately I found him by accident.
>> Fortunately, I found him by accident.
But I washed his body and hair, face too!!!
>> But I gave him a shower.
Of course he didn\'t take off his underware.
>> Ofcourse, I didn\'t take off his underwear.
But I\'m not a wife, and I\'m not a slave!!!
>> I\'m not his wife nor his slave!!!
He is crazy..
>> He is crazy.
oh my gosh. I really really really miss you.
>> Oh my gosh! I really miss you!
Talk to you tomorrow.
>> I\'ll talk to you tomorrow.
Have a good night sister.
>> May you have a good night, sister!
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