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Hello Jay,
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Teacher ELLY.
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I think it is fortune that I can belong to my family.
>>I think, I am fortunate that I belong to the family I have now.
I know that there are many guys who don\'t have their family because of their own reasons.
>>I know that there are many guys who don\'t have a family of their own for some reasons.
For them, even being supported by someone could mean something special.
>>For them, being supported by someone is already something special.
So I am really glad to have this kind of things naturally which could be unnatural for some people.
>>So, I am really glad to have this kind of normal thing in my life, which may not be the same for some people.
My parents have been supporting many things and sacrificing themselves since I was born.
>>My parents have been supporting me about so many things and they’ve been sacrificing themselves for my sake since I was born.
They always provide everything that I need whenever I tell them that I really want and those things are important for me.
>>They always provide everything that I need, whenever I tell them that it is really important for me and I really want to have it.
Sometimes I forget these thankful things but I am trying not to forget and reward.
>>Sometimes, I forget to be thankful about these things, but I always try to remember their goodness and that I would reward them one day for everything they’ve done for me.
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