Homework T.Liza
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT:
What is your favorite season. Why is this your favorite season. Tell me about the things that you so during this season.
My favorite season is spring.
many flower is blooming in spring,And warm sunbeams.
I go on a picnic in spring. with my mather or friend.
I usally go rade a bicycle.
So,I like spring.
Damn it!
In spring,I have a fresh term.
lololol
Than,I'll have a new friend.
so, my favorit season is spring.
How about you?
what is your favorite season.
Do you remember what did you do in your favorite season.
Thank you very much. Bye
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름],
I am very happy because you wrote a very nice composition. I can see that you are really improving. I just want you to focus on your vocabulary. Please becareful with the words that you are using my dear^^. Congratulations and keep up the good work. By the way we don\'t have spring in the Philippines. We don\'t have four seasons. We have summer any rainy season. But I like summer because we often go to the beach with my family or friend, Thanks again my dear [이름]^^
T.Liza
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT: What is your favorite season. Why is this your favorite season. Tell me about the things that you so during this season.My favorite season is spring.
>> Correctmany flower is blooming in spring,And warm sunbeams.
>> Many flowers are blooming in spring and the sunrays is warm.I go on a picnic in spring. with my mather or friend.
>>I go on a picnic in spring with my mother or my friends.I usally go rade a bicycle.
>>I usually ride a bicycle.So,I like spring.
>>CorrectDamn it!
>>( Baby becareful this is not a good expression this is a bad word)In spring,I have a fresh term.
>>CorrectlolololThan,I\'ll have a new friend.>>Then I will have new friendsso, my favorit season is spring.>>So my favorite season is spring.How about you?
>>Correct.what is your favorite season.
>>What is your favorite season?Do you remember what did you do in your favorite season.
>>Do you remember what did you do in your favorite season? ( If you are asking a question it should end in a question mark (?)^^ Thank you very much. Bye
>>Correct
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