Homework T.Liza

I'm sorry HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT: IF GIVEN THE CHANCE TO VISIT OTHER COUNTRIES, WHAT PLACE YOU WANT TO GO AND WHO DO YOU WANT TO BE WITH YOU DURING THAT TRIP? WRITE AS MANY SENTNECES AS YOU WANT. I wantIive in Australia because,in Australia live kangaroo,koala and many cow. I like cow. I expressly like steak. And wide grand . I like big. By the way I want live other country, Germany. In Germany,racial discrimination is not more extreme than other Europe. Becase , Nazi lived in Germany. Nazi was slaughter and racial discrimination But, now german are hate Nazi. So, german aren't racial discrimination. I want go Europe in Geramany

Hello [이름], I was very impressed with your homework. You are very expressive. I hope that you will continue doing this. Don\'t mind about your grammar error for now, what matter is that you were able to express your thoughts well. I hope that you will continue doing this. I will talk to you again tomorrow. T.Liza^^   I\'m sorry>> Correct >>I am sorry for not answering your call last Friday. >>OR I am sorry for doing my homework late.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT:IF GIVEN THE CHANCE TO VISIT OTHER COUNTRIES, WHAT PLACE YOU WANT TO GO AND WHO DO YOU WANT TO BE WITH YOU DURING THAT TRIP? WRITE AS MANY SENTNECES AS YOU WANT.I wantIive in Australia because,in Australia live kangaroo,koala and many cow. >>I want to live in Australia because in Australia there live a lot of kangaroo, koala and cow.I like cow. >>CorrectI expressly like steak. >>I love eating steak.And wide grand . >>Do you mean: I like grandiose things.I like big. >>CorrectBy the way>>Correct >>Or: In addition. I want live other country, Germany. >>I want to llive in other countries, like in Germany.In Germany,racial discrimination is not more extreme than other Europe. >>In Germany, the issue of racial discrimination is not that extreme than othre places in Europe.Becase , Nazi lived in Germany. >>Because Nazi\'s lived in Germany.Nazi was slaughter and racial discrimination >>The Nazi\'s were slaughtered and descriminated because of their race.But, now german are hate Nazi. >>But now German doesn\'t hate Nazi\'sSo, german aren\'t racial discrimination. >>So Germans are not discriminating races.I want go Europe in Geramany >>I want to got o Europe specially in Germany.