Homework : Talk about your most memorable vacation. Tell as much detail as you can.

My most memorable vacation was 2009 summer vacation that I traveled west coast in U.S. with my sister. We were excited as driving through the death valley that is the doorway to go to Las Vegas from California. How beautiful Las Vegas' night life is! Many people just think about gambles when they imagine Vegas. However, you will see various attractive things once you visit Vegas, for example, many gorgeous hotels, yummy buffets, night shows, Coca Cola musuem, New York express roller coaster, etc. Don't miss to visit Grand Canyon after having beautiful nights in Vegas. It will be better to prepare hiking shoes, and climing suits. Grand Canyon is very huge. So it will be great if you clime and walk through cliffs in Grand Canyon as many as possible, rather than driving a car in there. You will be able to touch the nature of Grand Canyon, and breathe the same air with him. Last but not least, San Diego is the most gorgeous city in California. Perfect blue sea and golden sand beach!

Hello there^^ Wow! Good job you were able to express your ideas well in this composition. I enjoyed reading your story. I hope so that I can also visit those places you mentioned in this composition. Have time to check the corrections here. See you in class^^. Good night! T.Kelly^^ My most memorable vacation was 2009 summer vacation that I traveled west coast in U.S. with my sister. >>My most memorable vacation was in summer of 2009 when I traveled to west coast in the U.S. with my sister. We were excited as driving through the death valley that is the doorway to go to Las Vegas from California. >> We were excited as we were driving through the Death Valley which is the doorway to Las Vegas from California. How beautiful Las Vegas\' night life is! Many people just think about gambles when they imagine Vegas. >>How beautiful Las Vegas\' night life is! Many people just think about gambling when they imagine Vegas. However, you will see various attractive things once you visit Vegas, for example, many gorgeous hotels, yummy buffets, night shows, Coca Cola musuem, New York express roller coaster, etc. >> However, you will see various attractive places once you visit Vegas, for example, many gorgeous hotels, yummy buffets, night shows, Coca Cola musuem, New York express roller coaster, etc. Don\'t miss to visit Grand Canyon after having beautiful nights in Vegas. >>Don\'t miss to visit the Grand Canyon after having a beautiful night in Vegas. It will be better to prepare hiking shoes, and climing suits. >> It will be better if you will also prepare your hiking shoes, and climbing suits. Grand Canyon is very huge. >> Correct So it will be great if you clime and walk through cliffs in Grand Canyon as many as possible, rather than driving a car in there. >> It will be great if you climb and walk through the cliffs of Grand Canyon for many times, rather than driving a car there. You will be able to touch the nature of Grand Canyon, and breathe the same air with him. >>CorrectLast but not least, San Diego is the most gorgeous city in California. >>Last but not the least, San Diego is the most gorgeous city in California. Perfect blue sea and golden sand beach! >> It\'s perfect for its blue sea and golden sand beach.