homework/ teacher I can not upload all the sentences it\'s up to 1000 the number of letters

2020-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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1. Because of the stormy weather many trains in the region are running at rish. 2. We were told by the travel agent to book behind schedule because the hotel is very popular among tourists. 3. I wanted to go to Spain over the extended weekend, but on second thoughts , I think I\'ll stay at home. 4. The young woman was under arrest for possessing a substantial amount of drugs. 5. They used to have on and off relationship, but at the moment they\'re seeing each other quite often. 6. You can only see a few planets with the naked eye. To see the others, you need a telescope. 7. His plan seemed very good in theory , but it didn\'t work out the way we wanted it to. 8. The President put troops and military advisors in the region between the lines, as a conflict seemed to be imminent. 9. Many tropical plants and animals are out of shape of becoming extinct over the next few decades. 10. in advance 11. on alert 12. on display 13. in deman 14. OUT OF BREATH 15. UNDER FIRE

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

I know that you can really do your best, I am very happy that you are very energetic with our class this morning. Please, remember the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistakes all the time.

T. Jeny


1. Because of the stormy weather many trains in the region are running at rish.
>>Because of the stormy weather many trains in the region are running behind schedule.
2. We were told by the travel agent to book behind schedule because the hotel is very popular among tourists.
>> We were told by the travel agent to book in advance because the hotel is very popular

among tourists.

3. I wanted to go to Spain over the extended weekend, but on second thoughts , I think I\'ll stay at home.
>>correct
4. The young woman was under arrest for possessing a substantial amount of drugs.
>>correct

5. They used to have on and off relationship, but at the moment they\'re seeing
each other quite often.
>>correct
6. You can only see a few planets with the naked eye. To see the others, you need a telescope.
>>>correct
7. His plan seemed very good in theory , but it didn\'t work out the way we wanted it to.
>>>correct
8. The President put troops and military advisors in the region between the lines, as a
conflict seemed to be imminent.
>>>The President put troops and military advisors in the region on alert, as a conflict

seemed to be imminent.

9. Many tropical plants and animals are out of shape of becoming extinct over the next few decades.
>>Many tropical plants and animals are at risk of becoming extinct over the next few decades.

10. in advance
>>If you read between the lines you will clearly see what he means.
11. on alert
>>I can\'t compete with you at the moment because I\'m completely out of shape and need

a few practice sessions.

12. on display
>>correct
13. in demand
>>correct
14. OUT OF BREATH
>>correct
15. UNDER FIRE
>>correct

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