Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]

2019-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to give my family the confidence that you are the most valuabl person in the world and I love all of you. And you\'re totally worth to live with full of happiness. Life is to feel what the happiness is especially in the happy family. You~~~ Are~~~ My~~~ E~~~verything~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ Thank you for your good homework!!! Teacher Jedah!!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for doing your homework despite your hectic schedule and sharing your thoughts on the topic. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

I agree with you Mr. [이름]. ^ ^ The most precious gift that we could ever have is the love of family. Knowing that they love you and you love them back is the most important thing. ^ ^

Just a reminder: Be careful with your pronouns. Be mindful with the use of \"you\"; \"they\" etc. Clearly you are pertaining to your family here. So you say \"they are my everything\" instead of \"you\". Readers might think otherwise. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I would like to give my family the confidence that you are the most valuabl person in the world and I love all of you.

>>I would like to give my family the confidence that they are the most valuable people in the world and that I love them all.
And you\'re totally worth to live with full of happiness.

>>And they are totally worth living for and it would be my honor to give them the happiness that they deserve. 
Life is to feel what the happiness is especially in the happy family. 

>>Life\'s happiness could be felt more with your family beside you.

You~~~ Are~~~ My~~~ E~~~verything~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
>>They are my everything! OR

>>They mean everything to me!

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