Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
-If you could learn to speak another language, which language would you like to learn? Why?- (^-^)
I would like to learn German because there are many great writings about philosophy I want to read.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
It\'s a very short essay, just one sentence! ^ ^ It\'s okay. You made it straight to the point! ^ ^ But, it would also be nice if you try to elaborate more. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I would like to learn German because there are many great writings about philosophy I want to read.
>>I would like to learn German because there are many great German writings about philosophy that I would want to read and understand.
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