Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Choose the correct word for each sentence
1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. Moreover I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. Whereas, there are some educational programs on.
3.Moreover , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.
4.Whereas the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. Moreover, she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Moreover, I had breakfast and left for work.
7. My brother works in a large office. whereas I work on my own at home.
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Whereas, I would be delighted to get out of the house.
9. You should go to university ~~. Moreover, it gives you~~
10. I don\'t want to go to~~I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket. Moreover look at the weather~~
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Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for the time you have spent with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
You only got one correct answer. I guess you are not quite familiar with your \"transition words\". We have different kinds and functions of transition words. Some may function to show \"cause and effect\"; some would show a \"sequence\". Please find time to know more about \"transition words\". ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. Moreover I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
>> I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too.At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. Whereas, there are some educational programs on.
2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. Whereas, there are some educational programs on.
>>Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. On the other hand, there are some educational programs on.
3.Moreover , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.
3.Moreover , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.
>>Firstly , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.
4.Whereas the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.
4.Whereas the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.
>>Though the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. Moreover, she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. Moreover, she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
>> I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Moreover, I had breakfast and left for work.
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Moreover, I had breakfast and left for work.
>> I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Then, I had breakfast and left for work.
7. My brother works in a large office. whereas I work on my own at home.
7. My brother works in a large office. whereas I work on my own at home.
>>Correct
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Whereas, I would be delighted to get out of the house.
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Whereas, I would be delighted to get out of the house.
>>Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Actually , I would be delighted to get out of the house.
9. You should go to university ~~. Moreover, it gives you~~
9. You should go to university ~~. Moreover, it gives you~~
>>You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. Moreover, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and get a better job.
10. I don\'t want to go to~~I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket. Moreover look at the weather~~
10. I don\'t want to go to~~I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket. Moreover look at the weather~~
>>I don\'t want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket. Besides , look at the weather! All that rain!
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