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I respect Ludwig Josef Johann Wittgenstein the most who is the Austrian Philosopher specialized in logic.
He is most excellent student in human history in his college life because he had ranged with his professor Bertrand Russel who had been most excellent philosopher in the world already.
Wittgenstein did great works in human history.
He provided a philosophical basis that human being escaped from God in human psychologic area.
He said \"Language that human use is only a signal, dose not mean the fact always.\" It\'s very interesting. ^^
For example, a pastor said, \"Our Father in heaven.\" Does pastor\'s father live in heaven really? No way!
Religion is only a matter of human thought.
He helped human being to escape from God since Aristotle for 2200 years.
His father was richest businessman. He dealt with iron industry. In that period, car, airplane, tank, aircraft carrier and iron-concrete building was the main industry. But Wittgenstein refused all estate for meditation.
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>>The person I respect the most is Austrian Philosopher Josef Johann Wittgenstein who specialized in logic.
He is most excellent student in human history in his college life because he had ranged with his professor Bertrand Russel who had been most excellent philosopher in the world already.
He is most excellent student in human history in his college life because he had ranged with his professor Bertrand Russel who had been most excellent philosopher in the world already.
>>He was the most excellent student in human history during his college life because he became as good as his professor Bertrand Russel who has been known as an excellent philosopher in the world.
Wittgenstein did great works in human history.
Wittgenstein did great works in human history.
>>Correct
He provided a philosophical basis that human being escaped from God in human psychologic area.
He provided a philosophical basis that human being escaped from God in human psychologic area.
>>He provided a philosophical basis that human beings escaped from God in the psychological area.
He said \"Language that human use is only a signal, dose not mean the fact always.\" It\'s very interesting. ^^
He said \"Language that human use is only a signal, dose not mean the fact always.\" It\'s very interesting. ^^
>>He said \"Language that humans use is only a signal, it isn\'t always the fact.\" It\'s very interesting. ^^
For example, a pastor said, \"Our Father in heaven.\" Does pastor\'s father live in heaven really? No way!
For example, a pastor said, \"Our Father in heaven.\" Does pastor\'s father live in heaven really? No way!
>>For example, a pastor said, \"Our Father in heaven.\" Does a pastor\'s father really live in heaven? No way!
Religion is only a matter of human thought.
Religion is only a matter of human thought.
>>Correct
He helped human being to escape from God since Aristotle for 2200 years.
He helped human being to escape from God since Aristotle for 2200 years.
>>He freed human beings from God since Aristotle for 2200 years.
His father was richest businessman.
His father was richest businessman.
>>His father was a rich businessman.
He dealt with iron industry.
>>Correct
In that period, car, airplane, tank, aircraft carrier and iron-concrete building was the main industry.
>>Correct
But Wittgenstein refused all estate for meditation.
>>But Wittgenstein refused all estates and focused with meditation instead.
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