Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Every moment that I have spend with my sweet kids is fondest moment. ^^
Especially, abroad family tour was precious time.
Guam, Las Vagas, Grand Canyon, LA , San Francisco,
London, Liverpool, Edinburgh, Dublin etc...
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing about your fondest memories. I have to agree with you. There is nothing more precious than to spend time with family! ^ ^ Wonderful man you are! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Every moment that I have spend with my sweet kids is fondest moment. ^^
>>Every moment that I have spent with my sweet kids are my fondest moments. ^^
Especially, abroad family tour was precious time.
Especially, abroad family tour was precious time.
>>Most especially family tours abroad are the most precious times.
Guam, Las Vagas, Grand Canyon, LA , San Francisco, London, Liverpool, Edinburgh, Dublin etc...
Guam, Las Vagas, Grand Canyon, LA , San Francisco, London, Liverpool, Edinburgh, Dublin etc...
>>Correct (Las Vegas)
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