Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
-What is the greatest secret to success?- (^-^)
The most important factor of success is \'Never give up\' at any terrible situation.
Human can experience happiness because of long period of biting the bullet.
Human can feel a sense of accomplishment after withstanding extremely hard pain to bear.
If there is no pain or loneliness, human cannot experience or feel happiness and emotional love about his life.
No pain, No gain.
Interestingly It is only chemical reaction in fact.
Fortunately human recognize it as philosophy or metaphysis, not chemical reaction. ^^
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-Teacher Jedah
The most important factor of success is \'Never give up\' at any terrible situation.
>>The most important factor for success is the quote; \"Never give up\" at any given situation no matter how hard the may be.
Human can experience happiness because of long period of biting the bullet.
>>Humans are able to experience happiness after long periods of biting the bullet.
Human can feel a sense of accomplishment after withstanding extremely hard pain to bear.
>>Humans can feel a sense of accomplishment after withstanding and being able to surpass extremely difficult pains.
If there is no pain or loneliness, human cannot experience or feel happiness and emotional love about his life.
>>If there is no pain or loneliness, humans cannot experience or feel happiness and emotional love for their life.
No pain, No gain.
>>Correct
Interestingly It is only chemical reaction in fact.
>>Interestingly, it\'s only a chemical reaction as a matter of fact.
Fortunately human recognize it as philosophy or metaphysis, not chemical reaction. ^^
>>Unfortunately humans recognize it as a philosophy or metaphysics, and not as a chemical reaction. ^^
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