Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
-What are the advantages/disadvantages of taking risks?
Taking risks in reasonable case is courageous choice.
And it leads to a progress and development.
Disadvantages are derived from misjudgment.
But Failure does not mean lose.
Failure maybe another success or a step of success.
Without failure, we cannot experience sense of accomplishment.
But I make mistake in English so much and I feel shortage of word every time. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. You did great. You\'re able to express yourself in a concise and sort of rhetoric way. It\'s also better if you\'re able to expound more. ^ ^
You didn\'t lack words here, only you forget to use your article \"a\" in some of your sentences. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Taking risks in reasonable case is courageous choice.
>>Taking risks in reasonable cases is a courageous choice.
And it leads to a progress and development.
And it leads to a progress and development.
>>And it leads to progress and development.
Disadvantages are derived from misjudgment.
Disadvantages are derived from misjudgment.
>>Correct
But Failure does not mean lose.
But Failure does not mean lose.
>>But Failure does not mean lost.
>>But Failure does not mean you lose.
Failure maybe another success or a step of success.
>>Failure maybe is another success or a step to success.
Without failure, we cannot experience sense of accomplishment.
Without failure, we cannot experience sense of accomplishment.
>>Without failure, we cannot experience a sense of accomplishment.
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