Homework, Teacher, Mrs. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important life lesson that my parents taught me was next.
One is \'Be honest to others, especially to yourself.\'
And Make an effort to succeed.
I can always keep in mind to be honest.
But I don\'t make a success yet. I still try to succeed everyday. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate the effort.
This homework is fine but a bit too short. You can make it a little longer by giving examples or elaborate on the details you have specified in your answer. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>The most important life lesson that my parents taught me was next. (your sentence structure is correct, but definitely this sentence is lacking in substance.)
One is \'Be honest to others, especially to yourself.\'
One is \'Be honest to others, especially to yourself.\'
>>Correct
And Make an effort to succeed.
>>Correct
I can always keep in mind to be honest.
And Make an effort to succeed.
>>Correct
I can always keep in mind to be honest.
>>Correct
But I don\'t make a success yet.
But I don\'t make a success yet.
>>But, I haven\'t succeeded on this one yet.
I still try to succeed everyday. ^^
>>Correct
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