Homework, Teacher, Ms. [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> Why is English fluency significant for you?
I should communicate with Foreign doctors officially.
I work for Korean Medical Association.
And I have many occasion to meet foreign doctors.
But I have problems to communicate with them in English.
My TOEIC score is about 600 now.
And I should react over 900 on several months.
I hope you could help me. ^^
Thank you for your kind question!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]. Thank you for this. It seems speaking English is necessary in your field of work. Of course I would be willing to help. This is an effort both of us should work on. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I should communicate with Foreign doctors officially.>>>> correct
I work for Korean Medical Association.
I work for Korean Medical Association.
>>>> correct
And I have many occasion to meet foreign doctors.
And I have many occasion to meet foreign doctors.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: There are many occasions where I have to meet foreign doctors.
But I have problems to communicate with them in English.
But I have problems to communicate with them in English.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: However, I have problems communicating with them in English.
>>>> OR: However, I\'m having a difficult time communicating with them in English.
My TOEIC score is about 600 now.
My TOEIC score is about 600 now.
>>>> correct
And I should react over 900 on several months.
And I should react over 900 on several months.
>>>> And I should reach over 900 in several months.
I hope you could help me. ^^
>>>> correct
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