HOMEWORK : Tell me how you spent your weekend

2021-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Last Sunday, my mother\'s was birthday. Younger brother and older sister came to home. They wrer leaving home to job a long time a go. But my job located near home. So I live home with my parents. We went to meat restaurant. That makes me feel like a barbecue party. Because there is a table outside. It\'s best food is seefood ramen. It is nothing much but delicious. I think beacouse there have mood.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름] [이름]! I am glad that you answered your homework. Thank you for being participative all the time. See you in our class. Have a wonderful day! :)

- Teacher Sophia

Last Sunday, my mother\'s was birthday.

>> Last Sunday was my mother\'s birthday.
Younger brother and older sister came to home.

>> My younger brother and older sister came home.
They wrer leaving home to job a long time a go.

>> They left home a long time ago because of their jobs.
But my job located near home. So I live home with my parents.

>> But my job is located near my home, so I live with my parents.
We went to meat restaurant. That makes me feel like a barbecue party. Because there is a table outside. It\'s best food is seefood ramen.

>> We went to a meat restaurant that felt like a barbecue party because there was a table outside. It\'s specialty food is seafood ramen.
It is nothing much but delicious.

>> There is nothing much, but the food is delicious.
I think beacouse there have mood.

>> I think it\'s because of the mood of the place.

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