Homework that makes me feel hungry.kkk

2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

We did talk about why we like cheese cakes.kkk But my answer is always same; because they are delicious!!! And I like plain cheese cakes with no toppings. Actually, I didn't know there are so many kinds of cheese cakes.(So I searched it.) For example, there are blueberry , strawberry , cherry, cookie cheese cakes and more. By the way, I was about to buy cheese cakes today. But on a second thought, this coming Sunday is my brother's birthday. So I persuade myself to eat cheese cakes on Sunday.kkk His birthday on this Sunday feel important to me because he has to serve his military service from April. Thus we can't celebrate his birthday together next year. And other than cheese cakes, do you like tteokbokki? It's also one of my favorite foods. To tell you the truth, there are a lot of food that is my favorite. And that's why I always need diet. kkk Bye:)

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sweetie!! This composition certainly made me feel really hungry. Actually, it made me crave for some cheesecakes. kkk Wow! Just the thought of it makes me happy and somewhat frustrated at the same time. haha! Anyway, yeah, I do like Tteokbokki too. :) I guess, our love for foods is something that we have in common. hahaha! Have a great day my dear and see you tomorrow~~ T.Kristel- We did talk about why we like cheese cakes.kkk >> CORRECT!!But my answer is always same; because they are delicious!!! >> And I would still answer the same; because they are delicious!!!And I like plain cheese cakes with no toppings. >> CORRECT!! Actually, I didn\'t know there are so many kinds of cheese cakes.(So I searched it.) >> CORRECT!!For example, there are blueberry , strawberry , cherry, cookie cheese cakes and more. >> CORRECT!!By the way, I was about to buy cheese cakes today. But on a second thought, this coming Sunday is my brother\'s birthday. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! So I persuade myself to eat cheese cakes on Sunday.kkk >> So, I persuaded myself to just eat on Sunday. kkkHis birthday on this Sunday feel important to me because he has to serve his military service from April. >> His birthday this Sunday feels important to me because he has to serve in the military from April.Thus we can\'t celebrate his birthday together next year. >> CORRECT!!And other than cheese cakes, do you like tteokbokki? >> CORRECT!!It\'s also one of my favorite foods. >> CORRECT!! >> It\'s also one of my favorites.To tell you the truth, there are a lot of food that is my favorite. >> To tell you the truth, I have a lot of favorites.And that\'s why I always need diet. kkk >> And that\'s why I always need to go on a diet. kkkBye:) >> CORRECT!!

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