homework : the packing list
학생이 쓴 원문
I \'m going to pack smartphone, passport, comfortable shoes
If I have smartphone, I can do anything.
I can find out a road, I can pay something, I can call my family
so, I must have smartphone
Also, I \'ll take a passport. because, I can go abroad
and, third one is comfortable shoes.
I think I \'m going to walk a lot . I like to walk into small road in the city
then, Can I ask what are you going to pack for your journey?
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay!
Thank you for asking.
I would bring my phone, clothes and books.
I like relaxing trips and I like taking pictures on my trips so I would need all of those.
Let\'s discuss more in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m going to pack smartphone, passport, comfortable shoes
>> I\'m going to pack my smartphone, passport and comfortable shoes.
If I have smartphone, I can do anything.
>> I\'m going to pack my smartphone, passport and comfortable shoes.
If I have smartphone, I can do anything.
>> If I have my smartphone, I can do anything.
I can find out a road, I can pay something, I can call my family
I can find out a road, I can pay something, I can call my family
>> I can find roads, pay for things and call my family.
so, I must have smartphone
>> So, I must have my smartphone.
Also, I \'ll take a passport. because, I can go abroad
>> I will also take my passport so that I can go abroad.
and, third one is comfortable shoes.
so, I must have smartphone
>> So, I must have my smartphone.
Also, I \'ll take a passport. because, I can go abroad
>> I will also take my passport so that I can go abroad.
and, third one is comfortable shoes.
>> The third one is comfortable shoes.
I think I\'m going to walk a lot .
I think I\'m going to walk a lot .
>> Correct
I like to walk into small road in the city
>> I like to walk on small roads in cities.
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