Homework(the reason why I applied for the job)

2013-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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I know there are a lot of risky factors in Africa including Nigeria, such as inner-war, administrative corruptions, starvation and disease. However, I was deeply impressed by the fact that LG Electronics survived to become the top electronics company in Nigeria, even though Nigeria could only provide low-level infra structure and public security. I'm the kind of person who tries to find an opportunity in difficult situations that everyone else tries to avoid. I know that LG Electronics has made a huge progress in Nigeria, but I believe there is still a lot to do for me.

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Well said Mac. I\'ve got no negative comments about your answer to this particular answer. You were able to sell your attitude well. Good job! T. Aurora I know there are a lot of risky factors in Africa including Nigeria, such as inner-war, administrative corruptions, starvation and disease. >>I know there are a lot of risky factors in Africa including Nigeria such as civil war, administrative corruptions, starvation and disease. However, I was deeply impressed by the fact that LG Electronics survived to become the top electronics company in Nigeria, even though Nigeria could only provide low-level infra structure and public security.  >>Correct!  I\'m the kind of person who tries to find an opportunity in difficult situations that everyone else tries to avoid. >>Correct! I know that LG Electronics has made a huge progress in Nigeria, but I believe there is still a lot to do for me. >>I know that LG Electronics has made a huge progress in Nigeria, but I believe there is still a lot that I can do

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