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2017-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

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sir~ Please, can you give a homework for writing skill from now. I'll have a writing test in interview next month. thank you for your effort ^^ ex) In 3 to 4 sentences: 1. Tell about a time when you lied to your parents, boss, or teacher. 2. What is your opinion about fortune telling? Directions: Read the passage below. Then answer questions about errors in the passage. My name is 1) Jay Hammond I am a firefighter. 2) I live in 128 Pine Lane, in Jackson, Mississippi. 3) I have two childs. One is a girl named Clair. 4) The other 5) is boy named Thatcher. 6) His name after my father. I also have a wife named Jenna. She is 7) beutiful. She has long, dark, soft hair. 8) We also got a dog named Buck. He is very obedient but sometimes he barks at night and it upsets our neighbors! 1) A. Jay. Hammond I am (o) B. Jay Hammond. I am C. Jay Hammond I’m D. Jay Hammond, I am 2) A. on 128 Pine Lane, on B. in 128 Pine Lane, on (o) C. at 128 Pine Lane, in D. in 128 Pine, Lane in 3) A. two child B. two children (o) C. two childrens D. Correct as is 4) A. Other B. Another C. The another D. Correct as is (o) 5) A. is boy name B. is boy of name C. is a boy named (o) D. is a boy who name 6) A. He is named after B. He has name from C. His name is same (o) D. He is same named 7) A. butiful B. beautyful C. beautiful (o) D. beautifull 8) A. got dog named Buck. B. got a dog name Buck. C. got dog name of Buck. D. have a dog named Buck.(o)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] Do, 
Thank you for answering your homework. 
~~ Teacher Kathy
My name is 1) Jay Hammond I am a firefighter. 2) I live in 128 Pine Lane, in Jackson, Mississippi. 3) I have two childs. One is a girl named Clair. 4) The other 5) is boy named Thatcher. 6) His name after my father. I also have a wife named Jenna.
She is 7) beutiful. She has long, dark, soft hair. 8) We also got a dog named Buck. He is very obedient but sometimes he barks at night and it upsets our neighbors!
1)
A. Jay. Hammond I am (o)
B. Jay Hammond. I am
C. Jay Hammond I’m
D. Jay Hammond, I am
>> B
2)
A. on 128 Pine Lane, on
B. in 128 Pine Lane, on (o)
C. at 128 Pine Lane, in
D. in 128 Pine, Lane in
>> C
3)
A. two child
B. two children (o)
C. two childrens
D. Correct as is
>> Correct!
4)
A. Other
B. Another
C. The another
D. Correct as is (o)
>> Correct!
5)
A. is boy name
B. is boy of name
C. is a boy named (o)
D. is a boy who name
>> Correct!
6)
A. He is named after
B. He has name from
C. His name is same (o)
D. He is same named
>> A.
7)
A. butiful
B. beautyful
C. beautiful (o)
D. beautifull
>> C. 
8)
A. got dog named Buck.
B. got a dog name Buck.
C. got dog name of Buck.
D. have a dog named Buck.(o)
>> Correct!

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