Homework Today

2012-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework Today 1-a 2-c 3-d 4-d 5-c 6-b 7-a 8-c 9-d 10-b Hello Jane supercalifragilisticexpialidocious--This long word was used on "Mary Poppins". I remember that I watched the movie in 1970s. It was very insteresting. The heroine was July Andrews who is a famous singer and an actress. I like American movies and dramas. However, current movies and dramas are too violent and disordered. So, recently I haven't watched them. Watching them, I sometimes feel tired. So I watch documentaries and news programs more. Next Monday that is Budda's birthday, I am going to go hiking with my choir members. We go to the Jangtaesan mountain in Daejon. There are many metasequoia trees that spurt out phytoncide. It is said that the phytoncide makes human healthy. I hope you will have a nice weekend.

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Hi! Good job with your homework! Keep it up! Thank you for sharing your composition! I really appreciate it. Take care and I hope you will have a nice weekend too! See you next week! T. Jane Homework Today1-a >>CORRECT 2-c >>CORRECT 3-d >>CORRECT 4-d >>CORRECT 5-c >>a. a 6-b >>CORRECT 7-a >>CORRECT 8-c >>CORRECT 9-d >>c. the 10-b >>CORRECTHello Jane >>Hello Jane!supercalifragilisticexpialidocious--This long word was used on \"Mary Poppins\". >>Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, this long word was used in \"Mary Poppins.\"I remember that I watched the movie in 1970s. >>CORRECTIt was very insteresting. >>It was very interesting.The heroine was July Andrews who is a famous singer and an actress.>>The heroine was Julie Andrews who is a famous singer and an actress.I like American movies and dramas. >>CORRECT However, current movies and dramas are too violent and disordered. >>CORRECT So, recently I haven\'t watched them. >>CORRECTWatching them, I sometimes feel tired. >>CORRECT OR >>Sometimes I feel tired watching them.So I watch documentaries and news programs more.>>CORRECTNext Monday that is Budda\'s birthday, I am going to go hiking with my choir members. >>Next Monday is Buddha\'s birthday so I will go hiking with my choir members.We go to the Jangtaesan mountain in Daejon. >>We will go to Jangtaesan Mountain in Daejon.There are many metasequoia trees that spurt out phytoncide. >>CORRECTIt is said that the phytoncide makes human healthy. >>CORRECTI hope you will have a nice weekend. >>CORRECT

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