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2012-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I`m happy today because in the the voss for pick the vice captain in my class. I give 24vote. So I`m very happy. My parent proud of me very much. And they are ike it very much. I happy very much, too. So I boast it. I can`t forget this day forever!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^, WOW!! CONGRATULATIONS!! I am also very proud and happy about this good news that you shared me. You deserved that position because you are a very good person and a smart student too^^. Keep up the good work my dear. Thank you so much and see you on Monday. Let\'s celebrate it. Cheers  T.Liza   I`m happy today because in the the voss for pick the vice captain in my class. >>I\'m happy today because we had an election and they voted me as the vice captain of my class. I give 24vote. >> I got 24 votes. So I`m very happy. >>Correct^^ My parent proud of me very much. >>My parents are very proud of me. And they are ike it very much. >>And they like it very much. I happy very much, too. >>I am very happy too. So I boast it. >>Correct^^ I can`t forget this day forever!!! >>Correct >>OR: I can\'t forget this day ever!!

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