Homework Today.
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1. My favorite toy is buzz. I watched "Toy Story" all series. And I saw buzz that movie. He is very cool guy! So, I told my dad, "I want buy toy of buzz!" And my dad bought buzz for me. I was so fun!
2. I get from them the cake, pencil, pencil case, eraser, Yo-Yo, some pens. I use them in now. And I use that forever!
강사 첨삭
HELLO [이름]^^
Yes, I agree with you Buzz Lightyear is very cool in that movie. I enjoyed watching that movie too. I hope that you will take good care of that toy and your other toys. Just like the boy, Andy in the movie Toy Story. You should also learn how to share your toys to with your brothers. Thank you for this one^^ Good night my [이름].
T.Liza^^
1. My favorite toy is buzz.
>>My favorite tiy is Buzz Lightyear.
I watched \"Toy Story\" all series.
>>I watched all series of \" Toy Stories\"
And I saw buzz that movie.
>>I saw Buzz in that movie.
He is very cool guy!
>>He is a very cool guy!
So, I told my dad, \"I want buy toy of buzz!\"
>>So, I told my dad, \"I want you to buy me a Buzz Lightyear!\"
And my dad bought buzz for me.
>>My dad bought Buzz for me.
I was so fun!
>>I was so very happy.2. I get from them the cake, pencil, pencil case, eraser, Yo-Yo, some pens.
>>I received cake, pencil case, eraser, yo-yo and some pens from them.
I use them in now.
>>I use all of them now.
And I use that forever!
>>I use that forever!
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