Homework today!
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I disagree with this statement. Fiction books are important as much as non-fiction books. First, fiction books can cure people who are tired of thier life. I think that's the reason that people are fanatical about fantasy novel. Second, we can imagine the situation that is written on the fiction books. So, it is important to read non-fiction books, but also fiction books, too!
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you again for promptly doing your homework. I feel so
happy because you\'re really exerting effort to do your homework.
Take care always!
~T. Lexi
Here are my corrections:
I disagree with this statement.
>>Correct!
Fiction books are important as much as non-fiction books.
>>Correct :)
First, fiction books can cure people who are tired of thier life.
>>Correct :) (spelling check- their)
>>OR: First, fiction books can help cure people who feel tired of their lives.
I think that\'s the reason that people are fanatical about fantasy novel.
>>I think that\'s the reason why some people are fanatical about fantasy novel.
Second, we can imagine the situation that is written on the fiction books.
>>Correct :)
So, it is important to read non-fiction books, but also fiction books, too!
>>Correct :)
Thank you again for promptly doing your homework. I feel so
happy because you\'re really exerting effort to do your homework.
Take care always!
~T. Lexi
Here are my corrections:
I disagree with this statement.
>>Correct!
Fiction books are important as much as non-fiction books.
>>Correct :)
First, fiction books can cure people who are tired of thier life.
>>Correct :) (spelling check- their)
>>OR: First, fiction books can help cure people who feel tired of their lives.
I think that\'s the reason that people are fanatical about fantasy novel.
>>I think that\'s the reason why some people are fanatical about fantasy novel.
Second, we can imagine the situation that is written on the fiction books.
>>Correct :)
So, it is important to read non-fiction books, but also fiction books, too!
>>Correct :)
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