Homework(travel)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher nice to meet you~, I write some sentences have a nice day~^^
Life is like travel. It means that we can experience new life from it. In our life, we meet parents and brothers and sisters for the first time. As we grow, we expand the radius of life little by little.
We start learning friendship when we are in kindergarten. we meet a new friend and a new teacher in their lives. We have to think about new people to adapt in new environment. It takes a long time to adapt there. Over time , we are familiar with new friends and new teacher. After the specified time period, we have to leave there and go forward new areas in our lives.
As we know, when we go to school, It also takes a time to adapt there and we also meet many friends and teachers. In other words, we meet many people and we go our separate ways in the course of time like a travel. While we travel somewhere, we also meet a new person and place. At the end of travel, we also have to leave again~.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework. I had fun talking to you today. Your answer to your homework is very interesting.
Please take note of the corrections I made.
Thank you again and have a blessed day!
-Teacher Shelly-
>>> Hi, teacher nice to meet you!
I write some sentences have a nice day~^^
>>> I wrote some sentences.
>>> Have a nice day!
Life is like travel.
>>> Life is like traveling.
Life is like travel.
>>> Life is like traveling.
It means that we can experience new life from it.
>>> Correct!
In our life, we meet parents and brothers and sisters for the first time.
>>> In our lives, we meet parents, brothers, and sisters for the first time.
As we grow, we expand the radius of life little by little.
>>> Correct!
We start learning friendship when we are in kindergarten.
We start learning friendship when we are in kindergarten.
>>> Correct!
we meet a new friend and a new teacher in their lives.
>>>We meet a new friend and a new teacher along the way.
We have to think about new people to adapt in new environment.
>>>We have to think about new people to adapt to in a new environment.
It takes a long time to adapt there.
>>> Correct!
Over time , we are familiar with new friends and new teacher.
>>> Over the time, we become familiar with new friends and new teachers.
After the specified time period, we have to leave there and go forward new areas in our lives.
>>> After a specific period of time, we have to leave and go forward to new areas of our lives.
As we know, when we go to school, it also takes a time to adapt there and we also meet many friends and teachers.
>>> After a specific period of time, we have to leave and go forward to new areas of our lives.
As we know, when we go to school, it also takes a time to adapt there and we also meet many friends and teachers.
>>> As we know, when we go to school, it also takes time to adapt there and we also meet many friends and teachers.
In other words, we meet many people and we go our separate ways in the course of time like a travel.
>>>In other words, we meet many people and we go our separate ways in the course of time like traveling.
While we travel somewhere, we also meet a new person and place.
>>> Correct!
At the end of travel, we also have to leave again~.
>>> At the end of each travel, we also have to leave again.
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