homework(tue)
학생이 쓴 원문
Q)What is your opinion about fortune telling?
Fortune seems to exist in our life but fortune just don't effect to us.
i think when you make an effort, you will get fortune.
sometimes i thought why did not fortune come to me.
However, if i don't make an effort i'm sure i don't get lucky.
In conclusion, fortune is worth to refer to our life but you shouldn't wholely depend on it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Do,
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Here are my corrections:
Fortune seems to exist in our life but fortune just don\'t effect to us.
>> Fortune seems to exist but it just don\'t affect us.
i think when you make an effort, you will get fortune.
i think when you make an effort, you will get fortune.
>>
I believe that when you exert effort, you will be lucky/you will get what you want.
sometimes i thought why did not fortune come to me.
>>
Sometimes I ask myself why fortune doesn\'t come to me.
However, if i don\'t make an effort i\'m sure i don\'t get lucky.
>> However, I know that when I don\'t exert effort, I won\'t get lucky.
In conclusion, fortune is worth to refer to our life but you shouldn\'t wholely depend on it.
In conclusion, fortune is worth to refer to our life but you shouldn\'t wholely depend on it.
>> Therefore, fortune is part of our life, but you can\'t fully depend on it.
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