Homework(two habits)

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing. You love reading books, don\'t you?

Yes. Everyone should value what we have and learn how to make things right.

By the way, I just like to tell you about the difference of \"first of all\" and \"firstly\".

First of all - before doing anything else, or before introducing your speech or paragraph

Firstly - used for beginning a list of events that happened, or for saying what will happen first

Talk to you again tomorrow! Take care. ^^

~~May~~

Everyone wants to succeed in their lives. so there are many books about success in the world.

>> Everyone wants to succeed in their lives that\'s why there are many published books about success in the world.

Most of the books recommend us two things (what to do or what not to do).

>> Most books want us to do two things (what to do or what not to do).

First of all, the things that you have to do to succeed are a positive mind, a specific vision, and sincere efforts and so on.

>> Firstly, the things that you need to have in order to succeed are a positive mind, a specific vision, and sincere efforts, etc.

Their core and common contents are to have goals(dreams) and live challenging lives with confidence.

>> The center of these is to have goals and live a challenging life with confidence.

It suggests that if you don\'t give up until you achieve it, you will succeed after all.

Secondly, there are also many things not to do.

>> CORRECT

Among them, getting rid of bad habits is the most successful way. Because, habits greatly affect the quality of our lives.

>> Among them is getting rid of bad habits which is the most successful way because habits greatly affect the quality of our lives.

So, if we make habits wrong, we can waste our priceless time.

>> So, if we make habits wrongly, we can just waste our time.

We live once and we can\'t go back.

>> We only live once and we can\'t get it back.

In conclusion, we have to change bad habits into good ones for a better and more valuable life.

Shall we get up early and exercise for our life~?

>> CORRECT