Homework(*^U^*)
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could give advice to me in last year, I will say \'Take your time\'.
Because last year, I have burden about my assignment so, when my friends say \'Let\'s play!\' and then I always say, \'No.. I have a lot of assignment..\'.
Of course I have a lot of design assignment but I think I am not running out of time.
I just have a concern about assignment, and I think concern took up my time.
Recently I feel more busy because I\'m in graduation year and I prepare transfer to another school.
So, I\'m sad that I should have been more relaxed last year.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. Yes, I understand what you mean perfectly. I also regret not taking my time and feeling overly burdened by my responsibilities. Let\'s remember to give ourselves a little time to relax ^_^
Regards,
T. Angelica
If I could give advice to me in last year, I will say \'Take your time\'.>>If I could advice myself last year, I would say, \'take your time\'.
Because last year, I have burden about my assignment so, when my friends say \'Let\'s play!\' and then I always say, \'No.. I have a lot of assignment..\'.
Because last year, I have burden about my assignment so, when my friends say \'Let\'s play!\' and then I always say, \'No.. I have a lot of assignment..\'.
>>Last year, I felt burdened by my assignments, so I always declined their invitations whenever my friends invited me to play.
Of course I have a lot of design assignment but I think I am not running out of time.
>>Of course, I have many design assignments, but I think I am not running out of time.
I just have a concern about assignment, and I think concern took up my time.
I just have a concern about assignment, and I think concern took up my time.
>> I just have concerns about my assignments and I think those concerns took up most of time.
Recently I feel more busy because I\'m in graduation year and I prepare transfer to another school.
Recently I feel more busy because I\'m in graduation year and I prepare transfer to another school.
>> Recently, I feel busier because I\'m in my graduating year and I\'m preparing to transfer to another school.
So, I\'m sad that I should have been more relaxed last year.
So, I\'m sad that I should have been more relaxed last year.
>> CORRECT.
OR>> I feel sad as I should have been more relaxed last year.
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