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2021-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Angelica

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I want to live in a single storey house with a garden. In the past, I wanted to live in a double decker house, but I got scared to live in that house after watching a horror movie like \'The Conjuring\'. Most of the horror movies with houses in the background, always something make sounds on the second floor when the characters are on the first floor. If that happens to me, I will not be able to fall asleep in that house. I hope that my dream house\'s size is not really big, because I like cozy things. I will plant many kinds of flowers and fruit trees in my garden. Have you ever seen the Japanese movie \"Little Forest\"? The main character in the movie grew fruits and plants outside the house and cooked with them. I think such a simple life is really cool. But I\'m little worried that there will be a lot of bugs if there\'s a garden near my house. I really hate bugs, so sometimes I hesitate to live in a countryside..

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you so much for this! How you imagine your dream house is lovely! I hate bugs too :< maybe you can keep a frog in small pond so that it\'ll eat the bugs :D I haven\'t seen the \"Little Forest\" yet, but I\'ll try to see if I can find it. It sounds nice. Take care and see you in class tomorrow! ^_^ 
~T. Angelica 
I want to live in a single storey house with a garden.
>> I want to live in a single-story house with a garden. 
In the past, I wanted to live in a double decker house, but I got scared to live in that house after watching a horror movie like \'The Conjuring\'.
>>CORRECT. (In the past, I wanted to live in a double-decker house) 
OR>> I had wanted to live in a double-decker house but I got scared to live in that kind of house after watching \'The Conjuring\'. 
Most of the horror movies with houses in the background, always something make sounds on the second floor when the characters are on the first floor. 
>>Most horror movies set in houses always have something that make sounds on the second floor when the characters are on the first floor. 
If that happens to me, I will not be able to fall asleep in that house.
>> CORRECT :) 
I hope that my dream house\'s size is not really big, because I like cozy things.
>> I hope that my dream house won\'t be huge because I like cozy things. 
I will plant many kinds of flowers and fruit trees in my garden. 
>> CORRECT :) 
Have you ever seen the Japanese movie \"Little Forest\"? 
>> CORECT :) 
The main character in the movie grew fruits and plants outside the house and cooked with them. 
>> CORRECT.
I think such a simple life is really cool.
>> CORRECT. 
But I\'m little worried that there will be a lot of bugs if there\'s a garden near my house.
>> But I\'m a little worried that there will be a lot of bugs if there\'s a garden near my house. 
I really hate bugs, so sometimes I hesitate to live in a countryside..
>> I really hate bugs so sometimes I hesitate to live in the countryside. 

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