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2020-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I prefer prefer paying cash because of my parents. My parents made me to use cash since I was [이름]. Because my parents are running a supermaket. When my parents worked in a supermarket, they prefer cash to credit/ debit card what they received for customers. Because we have to pay a fee when you use credit/ debit card. Therefore my parents made me to use cash. My parents told me that we also like cash, so we should use it when we pay at other restaurants or other store. 2. I think is not yet. but gradually, the usefulness of cash is fading away. Some people think the cash is damaged easily and having uncomfortable. And It\'s possible to pay for everything with the cash or the smartphone. Later, we will live in the world without cash. But every owner-operators like to receive the cash and I think it\'s good the smell of cash. However, we don\'t have to forget the importance of cash.

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`~Lucy


I prefer prefer paying cash because of my parents. 
>>CORRECT!
My parents made me to use cash since I was [이름].
>>CORRECT!
>>My parents taught me to use cash since I was [이름].
 Because my parents are running a supermaket. 
>> Because my parents are running a supermarket
When my parents worked in a supermarket, they prefer cash to credit/ debit card what they received for customers.
>>When my parents worked in a supermarket, they prefer cash to credit/ debit card from customers.
 Because we have to pay a fee when you use credit/ debit card. 
>>CORRECT!
Therefore my parents made me to use cash. 
>>CORRECT!
My parents told me that we also like cash, so we should use it when we pay at other restaurants or other store.
>>CORRECT!
I think is not yet.
>>I think it\'s not yet.
 but gradually, the usefulness of cash is fading away.
>>CORRECT!
 Some people think the cash is damaged easily and having uncomfortable. 
>> Some people think cash is easily damaged and having inconvenience
And It\'s possible to pay for everything with the cash or the smartphone.
>>And It\'s possible to pay for everything with cash or smartphone.
 Later, we will live in the world without cash.
>>CORRECT!
But every owner-operators like to receive the cash and I think it\'s good the smell of cash. 
>>But every owner-operators like to receive cash and I think it\'s smell of cash is good 
However, we don\'t have to forget the importance of cash.
>>CORRECT!

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