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I think same sex parenting is homosexual parents are raising children.
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I would agree with same sex parenting. Because they got married and they are human beings. I think the desire to raise a child is a human instinct. But they have to teach their a child not to be confused. I think it\'s important the process of having children. And I think the best way is the adoption. It\'s good thing to raise a child an abandoned child. However, that\'s their choice. Lastely, I don\'t understand homosexual. However as the same human I try to respect them.
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Thank you An!
I think same sex parenting is homosexual parents are raising children.
~Lucy
I think same sex parenting is homosexual parents are raising children.
>>I think same sex parenting is homosexual parents raising children.
I would agree with same sex parenting.
>>CORRECT!
Because they got married and they are human beings.
>>CORRECT!
I think the desire to raise a child is a human instinct.
>>CORRECT!
But they have to teach their a child not to be confused.
>>But they have to teach their child not to be confused.
I think it\'s important the process of having children.
>>I think the process of having children is important.
And I think the best way is the adoption.
>>And I think the best way is adoption.
It\'s good thing to raise a child an abandoned child.
>>It\'s good thing to raise an abandoned child.
However, that\'s their choice.
>>CORRECT!
Lastely, I don\'t understand homosexual.
>>Lastly, I don\'t understand homosexual.
However as the same human I try to respect them.
>>However, as a human I try to respect them.
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