Homework VS Birthday

2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is my birthday. So I blow out the candles and show to teacher Nina results. and studied and rivue my cubes. and practice some words and ended our class. OK. Now, Answer the following questions. 3. Do you have everything you need? Yes, I do. What are other answers to this question (about No) ? 4. What do you need? I need some cubes. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!
Happy happy birthday!
I am so thankful that I spent this day with you in our class.
I hope you liked the simple birthday cupcake for you through the screen.

I wish you good health and success.

Thank you for showing all of your cubes as well.

Have a great day. See you.

Teacher Nina


Today is my birthday.

>> CORRECT

So I blow out the candles and show to teacher Nina results.

>> I blew the candles and showed Teacher Nina the results.

and studied and rivue my cubes.

>> I studied and played with my cubes.
>> OR: I studied and showed y cubes.

and practice some words and ended our class.

>> And practiced some words and ended our class.

OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
3. Do you have everything you need?

Yes, I do.
>> CORRECT


What are other answers to this question (about No) ?

>> No, I don\'t have everything I want.

4. What do you need?

I need some cubes.
>> CORRECT


What are other answers to this question?

>> I need more cubes.

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