Homework : Were you ever embarrassed by your friend\'s/girlfriend\'s/boyfriend\'s/husband\'s/wife\'s

Hi Allen!

I think you could have given more attention to this composition.

Specific statements would work better.^^

I will give you some examples in class.

This is still a solid effort so you should still be happy about it.

~~ Teacher Sharon

Yes, I do.

>> Correct
 I usually don’t get angry by others’ mistakes.

>> I usually don’t get angry with others’ mistakes.
 Because they don’t have any bad subject to threat me.

>> This is because they don\'t really have bad intentions towards me.
 I can explain about this event as a example.

>> I can explain about this event as an example.
To be specific, a few days ago, my son didn\'t listen to my advices.

>> A few days ago, my son didn\'t listen to my advice.

If he is a adult, I might get angry at him.

>> If he is an adult, I might get angry at him.

This is because he didn\'t have any horrible subject at that time.

>> This is because he didn\'t have any horrible intentions at that time.
 In addition, somtimes he can\'t control his emotion and listen when he concentrate on others.

>> In addition, sometimes he can\'t control his emotions and he is easily distracted by others.
On the other hand, I am occasionally embarrassed by someone’s rudeness.

>> On the other hand, I am occasionally embarrassed by someone’s rudeness.
This is because they have exact purposes to hurt me.

>> This is because they want to hurt me on purpose.
 For example, when I asked a co-worker for giving a hand to fix my problem, he unkindly rejected my request.

>> For example, when I asked a co-worker to give me a hand in fixing my problem, he rudely rejected my request.

There was any reason and his response also did\'t make sense.

>> He didn\'t have any good reason and his response that time didn\'t make sense.
 So I was so embarrassed and I had to get more patient.

>>  So I was so embarrassed and I had to control my temper.
In conclude, I have got into several situations of changing emotion.

>> In conclusion, I have been back and forth in my emotions.
Sometimes it makes me to get angry.

>> Sometimes, I get angry.
 But I usually try to make better relationships because we live in society not alone.

>>  But I usually try to make better relationships because we live in a society.