HOMEWORK: What activities do you think are suitable for s[이름]ol reunions?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, having a light meal or drinking alcohol is suitable for a s[이름]ol reunion. You can feel a bit awkward when you meet your classmates for ages. Thus, it will help foster a comfortable atmosphere by having small talks, sharing memories while eating something and drinking. Actually, most of s[이름]ol reunions in Korea is not a s[이름]ol scale, but a class scale except for a few events of universities and high s[이름]ols. In addition, s[이름]ol reunions are not that much formal or frequent events here. For me, I also participated a s[이름]ol reunion only once. At that time, I met, hung out with, drank alcohol and had a conversation with several close friends. We don\'t gather all of our former classmates. Someday, when I am older and get a job, I suppose I might consider taking part in a more large-scale s[이름]ol reunion.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for your hard work! I liked how you shared your personal experience. ^^
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
In my opinion, having a light meal or drinking alcohol is suitable for a s[이름]ol reunion.
~ CORRECT.
You can feel a bit awkward when you meet your classmates for ages. Thus, it will help foster a comfortable atmosphere by having small talks, sharing memories while eating something and drinking.
~ You can feel a bit awkward when you meet classmates after ages. Thus, eating together and sharing memories helps create a comfortable atmosphere.
Actually, most of s[이름]ol reunions in Korea is not a s[이름]ol scale, but a class scale except for a few events of universities and high s[이름]ols.
~ Actually, most s[이름]ol reunions in Korea are not s[이름]ol-wide but class-based, except for a few events at universities and high s[이름]ols.
In addition, s[이름]ol reunions are not that much formal or frequent events here.
~ In addition, s[이름]ol reunions here are not very formal or frequent.
For me, I also participated a s[이름]ol reunion only once.
~ For me, I have participated in a s[이름]ol reunion only once.
At that time, I met, hung out with, drank alcohol and had a conversation with several close friends.
~ At that time, I met close friends, hung out, drank alcohol, and had conversations with them.
We don\'t gather all of our former classmates.
~ CORRECT.
Someday, when I am older and get a job, I suppose I might consider taking part in a more large-scale s[이름]ol reunion.
~ Someday, when I am older and have a job, I suppose I might consider taking part in a larger-scale s[이름]ol reunion.
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