Homework : What are some expectations parents have for their children?

Hi Allen!

I\'m sure that you have great expectations from your son.

I hope they all come true.

Thank you for sharing.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Most parents might have some expectations for their children.

>> Most parents might have some expectations from their children.
In this essay, I will talk about these expectations and explain my opinions.

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First of all, some parents in Korea strongly expect their children to get educational achievements.

>> Correct
 For example, they force that children go to academies everyday until late nights.

>> For example, they force their children to go to academies everyday until late at night.
Sometimes their children look tiring and unhappy.

>> Sometimes their children look tired and unhappy.
 So the level of ‘happiness’ in Korea has dramatically decreased so that it have been a critical issue in Korea.

>>  So the level of ‘happiness’ in Korea has dramatically decreased so that it has been a critical issue in our country.
Secondly, other parents just want that their children are healthy.

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 Their priorities on children’s health are more important than other things such as educational achievements.

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 They can do more things with children when they are healthy.

>>  They can do more things with their children when they are healthy.
 It makes some kinds of happiness for their families and solidifies their relationship.

>>  It creates a happy environment for their families and solidifies their relationship.
The nurture attitude of parents significantly affect many sides of their children.

>> The nurturing attitude of parents significantly affect many aspects in their children\'s lives.
 Therefore parents should limit their expectations because no one wants that their children feel unhappy.

>>  Therefore parents should limit their expectations because no one wants their children to feel unhappy.