Homework : What are some of the advantages of having a hobby?

Hello Allen!

This is another new week.

I am expecting that you will maintain that level of quality in your work.

We have come a long way and we have to keep up the good work.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

There is no doubt that having a hobby is very important and has several advantages.

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I will discuss these advantages and talk about my opinion.

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The first advantage of that is improvement of people life’s quality.

>> The first advantage is the improvement of people\'s quality of life.
People can’t work always and they need time to release their stress.

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Doing a hobby is one of the best ways to solve this problem.

>> Having a hobby is one of the best ways to solve this problem.
Furthermore, people who enjoy their hobby might have more productive to both work and personal life.

>> Furthermore, people who enjoy their hobby might be more productive in both their work and personal lives.
It makes the quality of their life enhance.

>> It enhances their quality of life.
The second advantage is benefits of the economy.

>> The second advantage is the benefits to the economy.
 Doing a hobby has enhanced several industries related to that.

>> Having a hobby has developed several industries related to those activities..
For example, people need specific products to enjoy their hobby.

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So, the industry that making these goods would be naturally developed by this situation.

>> So, the industry that makes these goods would naturally develop though this situation.
As a result, governments should support to keep their time to enjoy their hobbies.

>> As a result, governments should support people in spending time to enjoy their hobbies.
Because having a hobby effects a lot of sides of our life.

>> This is because having a hobby affects a lot of aspects in our lives.
These activities make a positive cycle.

>> These activities ensure a positive cycle.

It leads improvements to several sides.

>> It leads improvement to different parts of our lives.