Homework: What are the best and worst things about being wealthy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best think about being wealthy is happiness about think for my future because i think happiness have to be a basic money such as like a home and money to buy some meals and i don\'t have to think about my future and i think the worst think about being wealthy is dangerous every time when i want go out some where
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! I am happy that you answered the homework today. Just continue working hard so that you can achieve success. Keep safe and stay healthy! :)
- Teacher Sophia
>>> I think that the best thing about being wealthy is that it gives happiness. I think that happiness is when we have money to buy our wants such as; house, money and meal. Also, I don\'t need to worry about my future. But, the worst thing about being wealthy is that it can be dangerous.
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