Homework : What are the qualities a good cop should have?

Hello Allen!

Please take note of your articles.

This is a common mistake.

You just need to consider every noun in your sentences and think if it needs an article or not.

You already know the rules.

We just need to apply them.

~~ Teacher Sharon

It is difficult to be a qualified cop.

>> It is difficult to become a qualified cop.
So police definitely requires several qualities.

>> Being a police officer definitely requires several qualities.
In this essay, I will talk about these requirements and explain my opinions.

>> Correct
First of all, people who want to be cops or already should know well about the law.

>> First of all, people who want to be cops or are already cops should know the law well.
Knowledge on the law is usefully availed when they should be fair punishers occasionally.

>> Knowledge of the law is essential in the implementation of fair penalties.
This is a basic requirement to be a cop.

>> Correct
Secondly, they must have good physical abilities.

>> Correct
These abilities can be used in several situations.

>> Correct
For example, they can catch some criminals using their stamina.

>> For example, they can catch some criminals with their stamina.
Thirdly, one of the most important factors is justice and duty as a officer.

>> Thirdly, one of the most important factors is justice and duty as an officer.
Doing as a cop is as much hard as they give up their job.

>> Being a cop is a really difficult job.
 hey can’t keep their position if they don’t have any senses of justice and duty.

>> They can’t keep their position if they don’t have any sense of justice and duty.
In conclusion, attendees have to know exactly about these situations.

>> In conclusion, applicants for the job have to know exactly about these situations.
And governments also try to pick up qualified attendees having these abilities.

>> Governments should also try to pick qualified applicants possessing these abilities.