HOMEWORK: What are the three wishes you have for this year?

2020-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

My first wish is to get along well with my new classmates. And my second wish is to travel more with my family than in 2019. My last wish is to stop wasting useless money. And I will live happily and meaningfully in 2020!!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.

Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

My first wish is to get along well with my new classmates.

>> CORRECT!

And my second wish is to travel more with my family than in 2019.

>> CORRECT!

My last wish is to stop wasting useless money.

>> My last wish is to stop wasting money in things that I don\'t need.

And I will live happily and meaningfully in 2020!!

>> CORRECT!

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