HOMEWORK: What courses or subjects do you think should be added in s[이름]ol?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think most methods of Korean education are teacher-centered and memorization-based classes. For evaluation of test and efficiency, this kind of rote courses may have advantages, though students are not able to raise specific skills in this classes. In my opinion, if s[이름]ol includes courses that students can discuss their opinions and give a presentation after reading books or some materials, they could enhance the ability to think proactively and independently. Moreover, reading a text will help boost literacy that has decreased because of constant digital distractions. However, it is expected to be hard to implement this kind of classes because there are many conflicts with Korean education system.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for explaining your perspective. It was clear and well connected to the Korean education system. Well done!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I think most methods of Korean education are teacher-centered and memorization-based classes.
~ CORRECT.
For evaluation of test and efficiency, this kind of rote courses may have advantages, though students are not able to raise specific skills in this classes.
~ For test evaluation and efficiency, these kinds of rote courses may have advantages, though students are not able to develop specific skills in these classes.
In my opinion, if s[이름]ol includes courses that students can discuss their opinions and give a presentation after reading books or some materials, they could enhance the ability to think proactively and independently.
~ In my opinion, if s[이름]ols included courses where students could discuss their opinions and give presentations after reading books or other materials, they could enhance their ability to think proactively and independently.
Moreover, reading a text will help boost literacy that has decreased because of constant digital distractions.
~ CORRECT.
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