Homework-what I want to see into the future.
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task!
If you could look through a time machine and see 100 years into the future, what would you see? Explain briefly.
I would like to see normal people’s life such as what they eat for dinner or what they do for their hobby.
Since I think I can notice as seeing normal life of the future. And the other one is seeing the universe.
I think we can travel to the space with very easy way like taking the bus now. So I want to see when people travel to the space in the future and I would like to join them if I can. Seeing people’s normal life & seeing the space in the future are what I would like to see into the future.
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What can I say? You really are a very good student.
You are not just a very good speaker but you are also very good in writing.
Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Writing task!If you could look through a time machine and see 100 years into the future, what would you see? Explain briefly.I would like to see normal people’s life such as what they eat for dinner or what they do for their hobby.
>>correctSince I think I can notice as seeing normal life of the future.
>>correct
And the other one is seeing the universe.
>>correctI think we can travel to the space with very easy way like taking the bus now.
>>correct
So I want to see when people travel to the space in the future and I would like to join them if I can.
>>correct
Seeing people’s normal life & seeing the space in the future are what I would like to see into the future.
>>correct
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