homework(What is the most challenging part of your job?)

2018-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I'm the avian influenza director. Wild migratory birds are coming in winter. I work in a lot of poultry farms. So I'm very busy in the winter. But I like this job. The hardest thing for me is my next door person. Personality is not right for me He is very slow and lazy. I am a hasty person.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kate,


Thank you for doing your homework. See you again.


T. Tricia



I\'m the avian influenza director.

>> CORRECT!


Wild migratory birds are coming in winter.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Wild migratory birds are coming this winter.


I work in a lot of poultry farms.

>> CORRECT!


So I\'m very busy in the winter.

>> So, I\'m very busy during winter.


But I like this job.

>> CORRECT!


The hardest thing for me is my next door person.

>> The most challenging part about my job is the person next door.
 

Personality is not right for me

>> His personality doesn\'t match mine.


He is very slow and lazy.

>> He is lazy and works slow.


I am a hasty person.

>> CORRECT!

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