homework(What is the most challenging part of your job?)
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T. Tricia
I\'m the avian influenza director.
>> CORRECT!
Wild migratory birds are coming in winter.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Wild migratory birds are coming this winter.
I work in a lot of poultry farms.
>> CORRECT!
So I\'m very busy in the winter.
>> So, I\'m very busy during winter.
But I like this job.
>> CORRECT!
The hardest thing for me is my next door person.
>> The most challenging part about my job is the person next door.
Personality is not right for me
>> His personality doesn\'t match mine.
He is very slow and lazy.
>> He is lazy and works slow.
I am a hasty person.
>> CORRECT!
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