HOMEWORK: What is the most popular sport in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, there are a variety of popular sports. Most of all, in my opinion, many Koreans especially love to play and watch ball sports. Actually, the most famous sports leagues are professional football and baseball leagues, the K league and KBO. Each team\'s supporters go to stadiums to watch games and cheer for their team. And this culture makes people feel united and develop a sense of community. You can also see many students enjoying ball games at s[이름]ol. As popular as ball sports, hiking is also a very common outdoor activity in Korea. This is because most areas in Korea are surrounded by mountains. However, it tends to be popular among middle-aged people than young people. Moreover, since 2010s, esports have become a popular sport in Korea. In particular, League of Legends is the most popular. You might have heard the name of the famous LOL star, Faker, who has a status as high as Son Heung-min, a soccer player. This demonstrates how popular esports are in Korea.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
You gave a VERY complete answer, covering football, baseball, hiking, and esports! Well done! ^^
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
In Korea, there are a variety of popular sports.
~ CORRECT.
Most of all, in my opinion, many Koreans especially love to play and watch ball sports.
~ CORRECT.
Actually, the most famous sports leagues are professional football and baseball leagues, the K League and KBO.
~ CORRECT.
Each team\'s supporters go to stadiums to watch games and cheer for their team.
~ CORRECT.
And this culture makes people feel united and develop a sense of community.
~ CORRECT.
You can also see many students enjoying ball games at s[이름]ol.
~ CORRECT.
As popular as ball sports, hiking is also a very common outdoor activity in Korea.
~ CORRECT.
This is because most areas in Korea are surrounded by mountains.
~ CORRECT.
However, it tends to be popular among middle-aged people than young people.
~ However, it tends to be more popular among middle-aged people than young people.
Moreover, since 2010s, esports have become a popular sport in Korea.
~ Moreover, since the 2010s, esports have become a popular sport in Korea.
In particular, League of Legends is the most popular.
~ CORRECT.
You might have heard the name of the famous LOL star, Faker, who has a status as high as Son Heung-min, a soccer player.
~ CORRECT.
This demonstrates how popular esports are in Korea.
~ CORRECT.
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