Homework : What is the strangest food you have ever eaten?
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I don\'t try to eat strange food.
But, when I was young, I ate rabbit meat. I even remember that it was a rabbit raised at home.
I think the rabbit hurt its leg. Mom cheated on me and fed me the meat.
At that time, I didn\'t have enough food. She must have thought it was better to eat a wounded rabbit than to just dispose of it.
She cooked it to feed the child nutritionally. I ate rabbit meat deliciously, and I was surprised to find out later that it was rabbit meat.
Since then, I only eat certain foods that are what the ingredients are.
Actually, I\'m very picky eater.
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- T. Julia
First of all, I don\'t try to eat strange food.
>> Correct
But, when I was young, I ate rabbit meat.
>> Correct
I even remember that it was a rabbit raised at home.
>> Correct
I think the rabbit hurt its leg.
>> Correct
Mom cheated on me and fed me the meat.
>> Correct
OR >> My mom tricked me and fed me the meat.
At that time, I didn\'t have enough food.
>> Correct
She must have thought it was better to eat a wounded rabbit than to just dispose of it.
>> Correct
She cooked it to feed the child nutritionally.
>> She cooked it to provide nutrition for her children.
I ate rabbit meat deliciously, and I was surprised to find out later that it was rabbit meat.
>> I ate rabbit meat deliciously and was surprised to find out later that it was rabbit meat.
Since then, I only eat certain foods that are what the ingredients are.
>> Since then, I only eat certain foods when I know what the ingredients are.
Actually, I\'m very picky eater.
>> Actually, I\'m a very picky eater.
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