Homework:What is their best physical feature?

2016-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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She is a dentist whom I meet every day in the gym. I think she has best physical feature. Her body is muscular and flexible. Especially the central core part of body which contain the buttock of the hip, waist, the abdomen are muscular and their motion is free in all direction. I think good posture, regular exercise, and proper meals make a healthy body.

강사 첨삭

Hi Maria! ^^

Happy Weekend! ^^

Thank you for spending time to send in your homework. I appreciate it because I know how busy you are at work.

You can use this as practice if you have free time. Again, thank you so much. ^^

I\'ll see you in class ^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

She is a dentist whom I meet every day in the gym.

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I think she has best physical feature.

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Her body is muscular and flexible.

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Especially the central core part of body which contain the buttock of the hip, waist, the abdomen are muscular and their motion is free in all direction.

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I think good posture, regular exercise, and proper meals make a healthy body.

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